Professional Documentation: Working with my Script Editor

Due to the script being kept deliberately vague in order to inspire creativity during the module, there were only a few changes made to the script when working with my script editor Dan Walsh. Most of these changes can be scene on the noted script below. Aside from small changes to the action, such as the roll of pound notes being changed to dollars, Dan and I chose to change small parts of the dialogue to help give the characters a western feel, for example, Tommy's line:

"Your husbands dead isn't he?"

was changed to:

"Your husbands dead ain't he?"

Below are pictures of the notes I made with Dan.